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Writer's tip
#10: TWIST IN THE TALE STORIES
DO…
- Study your market. Read stories in your target publication and summarise them in a few sentences. Get a feel for its tone and readership (likes, dislikes, hobbies) by studying features and ads. Write for these readers, not for yourself.
- Send an SAE for a copy of the publication's submission guidelines and stick to them. Keep up to date.
- Aim to amaze. The success of a twist-ender rides on the surprise in the final paragraph. The skill comes in taking your reader along one path and revealing a different, parallel path, at the end that turns the story on its head.
- Keep it pacy: there is little room for description (stories are usually about 1,000 words). Think action, and build tension. Dialogue should work hard and move the plot along.
- Write believable, consistent characters that carry the story and get the reader hooked. Bear in mind that women's magazines often look for likeable characters that readers can relate to.
DON'T…
- Veer off-genre. What sort of story does the magazine publish? A ghost story, a revenge tale and a romance are poles apart. Don't write a dark gothic tale when a bright, breezy modern one is required. Stick to the guidelines and don't be gratuitous, or sexually explicit, unless the publication demands it.
- Con the reader. Avoid 'jack-in-the-box' finales- endings should be coherent with the tone of the story and characters' behaviour. While readers shouldn't see it coming, the ending should proceed logically from what has come before- at least in retrospect.
- Be predictable. Avoid endings that are done to death: 'And then I woke up'; twins; lottery stories; characters who turn out to be cats, dogs or ghosts; murdering the spouse; cinderella stories.
- Give away too much, too soon. The twist should come as close to the end as possible- the final paragraph, or the last line.


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